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She cute. need some unsavory things to be done to her.

FuShark responds:

Hah! Glad you like how she turned out. Hopefully there's more commissions of her down the line. :3c

Good idea, but it needs more work.

the biggest problem i see is the composition, theres just way too much negative space, and with the character centered in the lower part makes it look empty and not that interesting. The character is supposed to be the center of the illustration, then it needs to be what you focus on. i would suggest cropping out the excess space therefore making you focus on the character.
the color pallete is limited, but theres very little variation; blue on blue seems to work against each other and blend the figure into the background. the ocean has several blues and greens and various other colors that can be experimented with.

DragonPunch responds:

Okay! Thanks for that! It seems like you know what you're talking about.

need to sharpen your photoshop skills

i can see what you were trying to do, but this looks tacked on. the orange has pixelated edges and need to be smoothed in. Also the orange doesnt look right and need to be grounded into the scene, maybe a drop shadow under it to make it fit into the enviroment
even when i enhance the picture, the text is really hard to read, probably, if the font size were bigger or a color stroke.
all in all, i would suggest experimenting with several tools, this looks like it may have taken you about 5 mins to put together.
if you need any advice, i can recommend some good sites with photoshop tutorials.

PaulyBFromDa303 responds:

It was kinda a last minute thing. Yeah it did take about 5 minutes to put together XD.

I don't even use photoshop it was MS Paint. I'm not too serious when it comes to art, I just thought it would be fun to put on this site. I'm a bit more serious with my audio submissions

you do god's work son

great job on this, she looks like a parade float.

BizarroJoe responds:

And I was thinking this time I'd really go to hell for this... God has a weird sense of humour indeed...
That was the idea! I wanted her pose to look kinda like the Super Mario Bros. 3 cover, making her look deceptively happy and friendly (One of the traits I found most funny about this character was the fact one second she could look almost nice and cute and the next one, turn into a raging cannibalistic psycho.).
As I eventually decided to post it as a clip-art, people can try to use it to make their own wallpapers... You just make a mosaic-like background copypasting some random image and voilá! I suggest mudkips...

just another guy whos hungry for attention. i mostly do digital art here. im a gross aging nerd who draws boobs all day. mom said i should have been aborted. live in a trash can.

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